Inside information: Oh lord...now I can admit that this one the worse story I have ever wrote. I don't know what I was thinking. I was too bored. That's what it was. Well...a few ppl thought the story was okay, but to me...it actually didn't make any sense. I was just...bored and I wanted to do something. I don't wanna throw it away, so...I just put it on the site. Maybe someone out there will like it. Who knows? THE FAIR was written in the middle of '00...never revised. It took me a few days to write this story. I was at a fair when I came up with the idea.
THE FAIR | MAGICAL VILLAGE: 2000 novel
Rated R for language and violence

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Chapters: 13
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THE NEW NEIGHBORS

(CHAPTER 4)

“We’ve been sitting out here for a hour and a half and we haven’t seen anybody yet. I mean…we should’ve at least saw one person, but no. We haven’t seen zero”. I complained sitting on a chair. We all we’re sitting on a chair, with sunglasses on. We were sitting in front of a street, facing other houses on the other side. It was a pretty view of the cars. But that’s another problem. We haven’t even seen any cars driving by. “Have you guys notice we haven’t seen cars driving by. This is a HIGHWAY, and you know highway’s are usually busy, but not this one. The highway by our house was always busy. You could never find it empty”.

“Yeah, that is kinda true. We should’ve saw one car drive by”. Nancy added as she twirled her straw in her juice around.

“Holy Camoly. Look at those cute guys walking down the street”. We all looked Kim’s direction. “And it’s five, so that makes each one of us with a guy”.

“You think we should talk to them?” Samantha desperately asked.

“We’re on. Let’s just act like we were walking to go somewhere and we accidentally bump into them.

“Nancy what do you mean about bump into them?”

“LANDA, Not bump into them as hit them, but the other ‘bump into them’”.

“OHHH, OKAAY. So let’s hurry up before they pass us”. We all straightened our outfits up and twist our toots near the boys. We were now getting closer and closer. We walked pass them as if we were not interested in them.

“Excuse me?” We all turned around. “Hi…”

“Hey” We all said in a sexy, flirty way.

“Well we never saw you guys before so I’m guessing you’re new to the neighborhood”.

“Yeah. That’s right” Nancy softly said.

“Well are you guys busy, because we were going to the park and we wanted to know would you guys like to join us?” the curly haired boy asked.

“What’s your name?” I asked.

“Justin”

“Well Justin, why are you…asking all of the questions. Your friends can’t speak up or something. Not trying to be rude”.

“Yes they could speak but…”

“My name’s J.C.” a black haired, thin man added.

“I’m Lance” a dark brown haired, boy said.

“I’m Chris” he said as he shook our hands. “And I’m Joey” he also shook our hands.

“So you guys never told us your names” J.C. said.

“Well I’m Rolanda and these are my sisters…” Kathy interrupted.

“Kathy”

“Samantha”

“Nancy”

“And I’m Kim”

“You all are sisters?”

“Yep. We call ourselves ‘9-5-4’”

“Is there a reason for that?” the curly haired man walked up closer to us.

“Well…” I started stammering. “I haven’t realized how cute you are…” I was trying to remember his name.

“Justin” he added.

“Yeah, Justin”. We were gazing deeply in each other’s eyes when Chris interrupted.

“Okay enough with the love bird thing going here. We should be going Justin”.

“Oh yeah…but WAIT. You guys still haven’t told me if you wanted to come to the park with us?”

“Of coarse we’ll go”. Kim said as she walked by and softly grabbed J.C.’s arm and wrapped hers around his arm.

“Do you mind if I wrap my arm around yours?”

“Uh…No. I don’t mind”. Kim could really tell this guy liked her.

Chapter 5