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Inside information: Oh lord...now I can admit that this one the worse story I have ever wrote. I don't know what I was thinking. I was too bored. That's what it was. Well...a few ppl thought the story was okay, but to me...it actually didn't make any sense. I was just...bored and I wanted to do something. I don't wanna throw it away, so...I just put it on the site. Maybe someone out there will like it. Who knows? THE FAIR was written in the middle of '00...never revised. It took me a few days to write this story. I was at a fair when I came up with the idea.
THE FAIR | MAGICAL VILLAGE: 2000 novel
Rated R for language and violence

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Chapters: 13
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MAGICAL VILLAGE (PART 4)

(CHAPTER 11)

“LANCE. LANCE. WHERE ARE YOU?” Samantha yelled as she tried to grab a hold of him.

“I’M RIGHT HERE” He gripped onto her. “What’s happening? Why did the lights cut off?”

“I don’t know but I’m getting out of here” Sam let go of Lance and started running.

“SAM WAIT. WE NEED TO STAY TOGETHER!” he ran after her. “THIS IS NOT THE RIGHT TIME TO BE LOSING EACH OTHER!”

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Nancy and Chris walked slowly through the ‘use to be’ crowded fair. The fair was now completely empty. “Chris what are we going to do?” Suddenly a light flashed in on of the fair station.

“Did you see that?” they both asked each other at the same time. “Let’s go check it out”, Chris said as he held my hand tight. I followed him until we got to the ‘MONKEY ISLAND’ ride.

“EW! What is that awful smell?” I asked as I covered my nose.

“It smells like something dead” Chris opened the gate to the ride and we walked in. As soon as we got in the monkey ride we saw this horrible feature.

“AHHH!”

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“COME ON. LET’S GO FIND THE OTHERS”

“But Kathy how are we gonna find anybody in this dark, gigantic fair?”

“We’ll find…” just then a shadow passed us. “What was that?”

“What was what?” Joey asked

“That thing that just ran pass us” I looked around.

“A THING? Now you’re really getting PSYCHO”.

“NO I’M NOT. I SAW SOMETHING. IT WAS BLACK AND IT…” my eyes widened to the figure standing behind Joey. “JOEY BEHIND YOU!”

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“The gate is locked. Can you believe this?”

“STOP LYING J.C”

“KIM DOES IT LOOK LIKE A SMILE IS ON MY FACE. LOOK COME SEE FOR YOURSELF. SINCE YOU OBVIOUSLY DON’T BELIEVE ME”. She walked up to the gate and tried to yank it aside. “SEE. I TOLD YOU”.

“WHAT ARE WE GOING TO DO?”

“YOU’RE NOT GOING TO DO ANYTHING”. A voice behind us said.

Chapter 12