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Inside information: Oh lord...now I can admit that this one the worse story I have ever wrote. I don't know what I was thinking. I was too bored. That's what it was. Well...a few ppl thought the story was okay, but to me...it actually didn't make any sense. I was just...bored and I wanted to do something. I don't wanna throw it away, so...I just put it on the site. Maybe someone out there will like it. Who knows? THE FAIR was written in the middle of '00...never revised. It took me a few days to write this story. I was at a fair when I came up with the idea.
THE FAIR | MAGICAL VILLAGE: 2000 novel
Rated R for language and violence

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Chapters: 13
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MAGICAL VILLAGE (PART 5)

(CHAPTER 12)

“OH MY GOD. WHERE ARE WE?” just then a light cut on and I saw all of my sisters and their boyfriends. “OH MY GOSH!” I ran to them and hugged them. “WHAT HAPPENED?”

“Me and J.C. were trying to open the entrance gate when a man brought us here”.

“Joey and I were talking when some…some person wearing all black tied us up and brought us here where I met Kim and J.C.”

“Yeah, and me and Chris…”

“ENOUGH” a man in all black appeared and approached us. We took a few steps back. “THERE’S NO TIME TO HERE YOUR SILLY STORIES. YOU ARE HERE FOR A REASON, AND ONE REASON ONLY. YOU ARE GOING TO BE MY SLAVES. YOU WILL WORK…”

“NOOO. LET US GO!” Kim yelled.

“I WILL NOT LET YOU GO. SINCE YOUR LITTLE SO-CALLED BOYFRIENDS DIDN’T LISTEN TO ME. I WILL BE FORCED TO PUNISH THEM!”

“What?” I turned to Justin. He had this guilty look on his face. “Justin what is he talking about?”

“YEAH TELL HER JUSTIN! TELL HER WHAT I SUNT YOU GUYS TO DO!”

“Sent you to do?” I asked Justin.

“Chris WHAT IS HE TALKING ABOUT?” Nancy asked.

“Uh…um…”

“WHAT IS HE TALKING ABOUT?” She repeated.

Chris looked at the other guys. I could tell he was hoping one of the guys help him out.

“THERE WAITING!” the man yelled.

I kept my eyes on Justin. He turned to look at me and shrugged his shoulders. Chris bowed his head down and tucked his hands in his pockets.

“Alright. I’ll tell you”

Chapter 13