Inside information: Oh lord...now I can admit that this one the worse story I have ever wrote. I don't know what I was thinking. I was too bored. That's what it was. Well...a few ppl thought the story was okay, but to me...it actually didn't make any sense. I was just...bored and I wanted to do something. I don't wanna throw it away, so...I just put it on the site. Maybe someone out there will like it. Who knows? THE FAIR was written in the middle of '00...never revised. It took me a few days to write this story. I was at a fair when I came up with the idea.
THE FAIR | MAGICAL VILLAGE: 2000 novel
Rated R for language and violence

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Chapters: 13
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MAGICAL VILLAGE (PART 3)

(CHAPTER 10)

I stopped and slowly turned around. He walked closer to me. “But i…”

“I only said that to see how you would react. Now I’m guessing that wasn’t such a good idea”

“So you…really are deeply in love with me?”

“Not…deeply in love with you” he smiled. I gave him and evil look.

“I’m just kidding. I thought you were gonna curse me out a minute there.” He grabbed my hand. “Let’s go on some more rides”.

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”Where is everybody? Just an hour ago this place was packed. Now it looks like 50 people”. Kathy said to Joey.

“I don’t know. Hey are you up for some ice cream?” he said as he walked faster, holding kathy’s hand to the ice cream booth.

“YEAH!” she ran behind him.

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“Umm this pizza is the BOMB!”

“You ain’t lyin’” Joshua (J.C.) said to Kim as he bit on another piece. “After this we could settle down our stomach while going to look for the other’s”. he bit another piece.

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“We just about went on all the rides”. Samantha said drowsily.

“Nope. We still have three more. Let’s go on the snake ride” Lance ran to the booth where there was know employee.

“WAIT FOR ME!” I made it there.

“Where is the person that suppose to be here?” Lance walked on the other side by the entrance of the ride. “CLOSED FOR THE NIGHT? BUT IT CAN’T BE. ALL THE RIDES ARE SUPPOSE TO BE OPEN UNTIL THE FAIR CLOSE. Man this is not right here”. We walked to another booth.

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Justin and I just about gotten on all the rides we just had a few more. We walked up to the Twirl –R- Whirl ride and know employee was there. “Where are the employees? They suppose to be here. This is like the fourth booth we went to that is closed”. I complained angrily.

“Well let’s go to the Spin O Rama ride” Justin walked fast as I followed behind him. An employee was there this time. When the employee saw us he hurried and put a closed sign on the gate. “WHAT? WAIT. WHAT ARE YOU DOING?” Justin ran faster before the man could disappear.

“I’m Closed” the grumpy old man said and rushed behind the ride area. Suddenly the gates started closing and the lights started cutting off.

“OH MY GOD. JUSTIN WHAT’S HAPPENING?”

Chapter 11