Inside information: Oh lord...now I can admit that this one the worse story I have ever wrote. I don't know what I was thinking. I was too bored. That's what it was. Well...a few ppl thought the story was okay, but to me...it actually didn't make any sense. I was just...bored and I wanted to do something. I don't wanna throw it away, so...I just put it on the site. Maybe someone out there will like it. Who knows? THE FAIR was written in the middle of '00...never revised. It took me a few days to write this story. I was at a fair when I came up with the idea.
THE FAIR | MAGICAL VILLAGE: 2000 novel
Rated R for language and violence

CHAPTERS:
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 13

Chapters: 13
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EPILOGUE

(CHAPTER 13)

“It was last year…when we moved in this neighborhood. We were very suspicious, just like you guys. Well any way, we found a poster that was opening a fair. This fair. So we decided to go and when we went. The same thing happened that happened tonight. We were locked in a room, and not just us, other people also. But ever since we had to work for that man”. Chris pointed to him.

“AND…” the man requested.

“And this was our duty. To bring you guys to the fair and when the gates closed we were suppose to turn you in…” I heard Nancy ask ‘what?’. “…but the guys and I decided not to, because we fell in love. But since we didn’t we are gonna get punished”. Chris voice started shaking.

“YEP. SINCE YOU BUYS DISOBEYED ME!”

“SHUT UP YOU FUCKING BITCH!” Kim yelled. The man started laughing.

“But how do you explain the guy who stopped by our house to give my mother some posters?” I asked

“THAT’S WHERE I COME IN”. I gave the man a questionable look. He took his black mask off. I gasped.

“OH MY GOODNESS” I looked at Justin then the man. “THEIR’S TWO OF YOU”.

“THAT’S RIGHT. TWO” the man smiled.

“Why didn’t you tell me you had a twin?”

“Because I don’t have a twin”. He said without eye contact.

“Then who is he?” I pointed to the duplicate of Justin.

“That’s a clone”. He answered still without eye contact.

“A Clone?”

“Yes. A clone” Justin bowed his head down in ashamement.

“But How?”

“I’LL ANSWER THAT FOR YOU. MY MASTER MADE A CLONE OF HIM” Just then a man walked from out of the darkness. “SAY HELLO TO OUR MASTER” Justin and the guys bowed down to him. “What is this?” I mumbled. They stood up.

“Hello people” the man responded

“Who are you?” Kathy asked.

“I’m the ruler of this town and you all are going to be my slaves” he laughed loudly. You could see his big belly going up and down as he laughed even harder.

“Why in the daylight you can’t see this fair?”

“Because it doesn’t exist. Just like LOVELYVILLE will when I capture everybody”.

Justin whispered in my ear. “They can’t stand light. So all we have to do is get them to where light is”

I spoke up. “SO THAT EXPLAINS WHY WE NEVER SEE ANYBODY DURING THE DAYTIME, but we don’t see anybody during the night time either”

“HUSH YOUR MOUTH. NOW FOR YOU BOYS PUNISHMENT”

“NOOO! I found a flashlight under the table. I was hoping it was working, but we were lucky because it worked. Nancy flashed it in both of the mens eyes. They started yelling, and screaming.

“AHHH! STOP! GET THAT THING OUT OF MY EYE!” they started smoking up. Then melting until they were liquid. Nancy dropped the flashlight and wrapped her arms around Chris.

“Let’s get out of here”. We all released the people who were locked up in the room. Then we left. The next day when we woke up we saw on the news that they discovered the aliens they were looking for, and the secret fair that they also discovered, where the people who they were looking for was hidden for over a year. I smiled and looked out of the window. I finally saw people outside having the time of their lives. They must’ve really been locked up too long. So aliens tried to take over our neighborhood, but 5 young adults came to the rescue.

Now we see our neighbors every day since we’ve been staying here for the past 10 years.

THE END

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